7 December 2009

The Time Traveler’s Fail-Safe

He wouldn't have noticed her, but for her hair. Her hair had a very distinct smell, like lemons and strawberries and cheese and a lot of everything that could smell as nice. He looked up, and found her staring at him very intently, and at the desk he was in the process of so convincingly destroying.

“Erm, dear, what in fuck’s name are you doing? And why does it have to involve murdering my antique mahogany desk? You know we love that desk, don't you?” she asked him, very patiently.
“We do? No, I mean, of course we do. But don't worry about the desk, antiques are a thing of the past now.” he mumbled, and continued writing on the desk with what looked a lot like her purple permanent marker. She was very slightly glad he didn't use the fluorescent green, but that wasn't quite helping the desk, not with the purple epsilons scribbled across the aged mahogany.

She decided she would wait for him to finish - the desk was quite beyond saving anyhow, and she was sure she didn't love the desk as much as she thought she did - she struck a match against the hard granite wall, and as the flame flickers, slowly brings it to the cigarette dangling between her lips.

He noticed another smell interfering with all the lemons and the strawberries and the camembert, so he held his breath until the longing should pass. He had promised himself he wouldn't smoke for eight months, and at eight weeks, he was still going strong. “Are we nearly done yet?” she asked, crushing the last few drags into an ashtray. “I hope so, though I have a feeling that e might not be as close to c-squared as I would have liked.” he was mumbling again, but she couldn't hold back the temptation, “Good god, what do we do?” “I suppose we'll just have to ask Einstein.”

She smiled at him, a soft smile twisted at one end, the kind he liked to keep looking at, and want to stop completely and utterly ruining the desk, maybe. He had convinced himself that this smile was utterly and completely his own, and he was right. She gave this smile to no one else but him.

“And we could get you another desk, yes, what period is this? Looks like late Victorian, though I wouldn't trust myself. Wish you could come along and pick one out. Although hauling it through time and space is going to be an absolute bitch, especially those parts with space.” he might have been talking to that desk, but she knew he was saying he would be gone again, and that he should be back in time for dinner if he knew what's good for him, and he could bring another absolutely horrid desk with him if he felt like the trouble. He's never had any taste for fine furniture.

A moment later, and he wasn't there. Technically, he wasn't quite then either, but that's the thing about time-travel, you can never belong. Not to time, nor space. You just find a person to hold onto you in the present, so that you can always find your way back. The time-traveler's fail-safe smiled softly.

By:
Sarthak Prakash

9 comments:

  1. "amazing" is the right word for this story.

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  2. Very enjoyable read. :) Specially with a tasteful ending like that.

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  3. i have no comments, but still, i'm writing something so that you know that i have read the story......
    now that i think of the story, i feel like saying "good work", it certainly makes me a bit happy.....
    keep up the good work...
    cheers

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  4. I really like your style. What's best is to know that I've read a whole story in those few lines! LOVELY Sa**** ( I am really trying hard to not...)

    In your speak, 'fucking nice' :-)

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  5. Time travel may be achieved one day, or it may not. But if it is, it should not require any fundamental change in world-view, just a better understanding of the idea presented by you in this story..

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  6. plaudits sarthak....
    great read,well rounded and skewed at the same time...good work

    PS: this is very un-adams,btw, slightly.....eh...wat do i say.....sombre for adam's uppity sarcasm....

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  7. superbly written, though in the beginning i wasnt quite able to understand... but interesting as it is, sarthak, i didnt understand why its the "fail-safe". care to explain please?
    otherwise, over all, i wished it lasted a bit more, and very honestly, it lacked sarthak sense of humour, and i am very sure u know what i mean!
    keep writing, as you say,
    "for the better or the verse" ;-)

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  8. "The time-traveler's fail-safe smiled softly."
    I loved the ending, though for a while I thought you were writing about the movie! :D

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